cross-posted from: https://feddit.de/post/5328368
The idea is to have a piece of fiction that you can give a person to experience the Fediverse while also being moderately entertained in the process. So: would you give this story to a person that doesn’t know anything about the Fediverse? I would love to hear your opinions. I will try to incorporate feedback into the story but no promises!
Getting someone else to edit it would help. There’s a lot going on in every sentence.
Yeah, probably. So you like the story in general its just too much going on?